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02-10-04, 01:23 PM
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FanTa ZeE
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yeah, good concept, i just thought the line:
i love to make you hatred
threw me off a little, but it was still a good piece, i like the scheme, consistent and you made a simple yet effective piece of writing..good.
FanTa ZeE