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oakely
Hmmm...How should I hurt Diverse?
Should I start wit da fact that he's elite's worste?/1
nice personal, 7/10

Seriously...Elite? How is that possible?
Oh wait....You only got in there for Topicals.../2
lol, simple but effective, 7/10

Stick wit the text Diverse..Stay outta the booth..
We all know ur just a girl..who can't handle the truth!(avi)/3
not hard hitting, 4/

I fill this wannabe vet wit verbular lead...
Come on!..You actually lost to that herb CarsonJet!/4
bad wording lets u donw, not hard hitting, 4/10

I came lookin for talent an I found this Antonym..
After this, U can add 1 less win..along wit reppin Acro Nim(sig)/5
nice, 6/10

Bitch...Ima end it, hook the IV's an give ya anesthetics...
And no...I dont even wanna know which boyfreind is Poetic.(avi)/6
lol, made me laugh, 7/10

simple but effective, punches, nice overall verse!!

overall 36/60

Diverse
Oakley's just another knock off version of a name brand
I'm already hot and this kid just got my flames fanned
not too bad, 5/10

You ain't UV resistant, my Unique Verse causes melignoma
Change from shades to eye covers b/c your sleeping...in a coma
creative, 7/10

Fuck Maryland, even the state you live in is named after a girl
Surrounded by femininity so you feel comfortable in this world
lol, again nice punch, 7/10

You call that an Avi? I call it a Powerpoint failed attempt
Have to tax all the wack herbs, don't think that your exempt
nice personal, 7/10

Never saw my side to the story, your straight ahead like tunnel vision
In theory your not bad, but accidents can happen like NASA missions
good punch, 5/10

This kids needs help but I doubt Feeble would tutor you at all
So know you've hit a dead end, banging your head against the wall
bad wording let u down, 5/10

overall 35/60