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Light Weight
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IP:
retard101
look at this fool messin with a member of Kryogenix/
ya names Diverse man that must be a curse/
-flo,personal = 2
cause fuckin wit me will just put your ass in a herse/
hold on a min. your your record is 24-6 y you messin wit dis/
-flo,punch,personal,self hype = 3
runin around bitch slapped tryin to get a few more noobie battle wins/
aint that kind of a bit pussyish for you/
so as i leave you with this can you stand up to a mid west CRIP/
personal,-flo = 2
By far the worste I have seen so far. Alot didn't make sense and nothing really ryhmed. It seemed as if you let your anger get to your verse. Work on this stuff.
Overall = 7
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Diverse
I'll leave this crip profusely drippin with blood
Reached for his keyboard but pulled back a stub
punch,metiphore,personal = 7
Kryogenically frozen in his mental retard state
Missed a whole day of school cuz the short bus was late
personal,metiphore,punch = 6
Retard 101, this kid needs much special attention
kids not ill, he's a hypochondriac, thought i would mention
personal,vocab,punch = 6
called out for a 10-25 line spit, hit his 7 max,& suddenly quit
But this ain't for nothin, it's the first loss your gonna get
personal,-feed = 6
Fuck these last lines I'll just use them strictly for filler
blah blah blah..Tombstone readsiverse was my killer
-confusion,filler = 4
This was OK, much better than the above retard101, I noticed you fed a lil bit so I'm guessing you slacked off because you read his verse before hand. So I understand the lack of effort here. Much better any ways, clearly.
Overall = 29
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Vote = Diverse
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