can't say Im into all this really deep stuff, but I enjoyed that.well written. well structured.Not much I could say other than I would've liked to have seen a few more multi's myself, but that's just a matter of taste. Keep up the good work, I wouldn't pay too much attention to it when people speak about a lack of vocab. Music and lyrics are an expression, and expressions should be made to be understood. Anyway I really liked it good work. (flow was good too )