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Old 02-10-04, 01:58 PM   #36
THE DALABIL
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Say!!!
"To the Capital where kids evaporated on the National Mall,
the intense heat printing their shadows on the back of the walls!
The shadows … they seemed to almost breathe, cackle and call
Shadows of past acts and blissfully ignorant works of camouflage!
The Shadows!!" I thought this was the dopest part of all three until...

"Sliding shadowed visions of imprisoment, shades of confinement
The Capitol cast shadows of mass class assasination assignments"

then...verse 2 line 2 kind'of got throw'd a bit..until I remembered this is a dope story.

Overall...props!! This second was the dopest (in my humble opinion)

The whole thing should be audio though for emphasis!!

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