Young Savage
A 20 minute time limit can't stop the flow, i'm a show stopper, you just "Stop The Show"/
You the type of kat to freeze up like "Water" i'll put you in my "Time Piece"(Watch) see it "Glow"/
-streched,metiphore = 3
This guy sucks so bad he wants to "Kiss Me" just so we can "Change Spits"/
Mixed "Potassium" and "Guns" together and feed u "Banana Clips"/
wordplay,punch,vocab,-fruity = 6
Rhyme in suspension "Ima Kill You Witness" my "Key-Phrase"/
Ill have ya “Heart” Pumpin “Less Beats” then a “Armless D.J.”/
metiphore,wordplay = 6
"Brush" The "Fuss" Off Like "Dust", Then "Adjust” Muh “Clutch" To ''Crush-Blak'' Wit Muh ''Flush-Touch''/
Dude’s Actin “Tough”, But Only “Cums Rough” When He’s In A “Rush” To ‘Bust-Butts’/
mutli,punch,-confusion,-streched = 5
But Young Savage’s “Stuffed” Wit A ‘Robust-Crust’(Thick Skin) “Cuffed” Wit Enough “Thrusts” To "Combust-Guts" & Leave This ‘Slut-Hushed’/
multi,-vocab,-confusion = 4
Use multiple “Method’s” to hit this “MAN” and leave him ~fucked where he stands~/
Axe in my palm, I’ll took both your legs with a ~swing of my hand~/
multi,-wordplay = 5
Only gotta “give 50%” in this battle cause now you are only ~half of a man~/
Make Ya "Guard Your Nightmares" To "Secure-Ya-Dreams"..'Top 25 Of All Time'?..I'll "Assure-You-Ur-Unseen"/
I'll fukin Cure-Ya-Scenes.. Cuz The Board Already "Takes Blak" For Granted Like "Mature-Pre-Teens"/
-structure,-stretched,metiphore = 5

OK i guess, nothing I really would wanna right home about. You really did over do the multi's makin this quit a confusing and boring verse. I would say you should work on cuttin your lines down and simplicity, no punches really present either. Work on that...
Overall = 29
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Black Woods
what you like to write about,we can fight it out,
catch a punchline right in da mouth,
punch = 6
from da south, but more like a bitch in da hood,
i leave you stranded in a dark forest nigga, you lost in blak woods,
personal = 4
you gone find out why you shoulden't test niggaz you hearda,
you a herb mc, wonderin why you be gettin murdered,
punch = 4
you a lil faka copyin and pastin lyrics from friendz,
i like to shit on cats like you, you win, that depens,---(adult dipers)
personal,-confusion = 3
you wouldn't bust a good verse if you read from the bible,
it'll neva happen, nigga i'm liable,
-structure,metiphore,-played = 3
ta merk you then go afta somebody betta,
fuck line fa line, i kill you letta fa letta,
filler = 2
fuck this lil battle you get beat to bad,
young savage, more like a old puzz on da rag...
metiphore,punch = 3

Had the right idea initially, but you lacked alot of content. Simple is good but there's a difference between simple an basic and you were basic. You need to work on your punches. Work on that.
Overall = 22
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Vote = Young Savage

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