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Old 02-10-04, 03:05 PM   #12
Ambitious
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damn pen ...this was a great epic....
imagry was off the hook here.....your flow and consistancy were good too...
liked the wordplay.....the verses started off nicely....i followed each piece and it all made sense in a way....this was good shit....i was kinda waitin for it after the last one....nice dope ass piece....keep at it dawg....and hey....love is a very touchy subject....my verse on that with Credz....was the line amount he wanted i would have had lots more to say!....it would'a got very dark...im sure you can fatham the idea....

8.5/10 peace
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