Vote Diverse
Diverse- Nice PUnches, I Was Feeling IT. You Had Nice Flow And Your Punches Helped That Alot. Nice Structure, Can Be Better Tho, But Nice Structure. Vocab Was Decent, Nothing To Impressive There. Personals, Ehh, You Can AAAWork On Those So...Nice verse
Retard? FOr Real, Elevate, Match up Ur Lines Straight< And Take Away The / at The End Its "Newbie" Lol. Put Punches In There, They failed
And Get Better Flow. Make Sure You Have Nice Short LInes, That line Up LIke So
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Feel Me? Bad Verse..
DIVERSE
Punches= B
Flow= A -
Vocab= B
Personals= C+
Overal Grade = B/B-
RETARD
Punches= C-
Flow= C +
Vocab= D
Personals= C
Vocab= E
Overall Grade= D-/D+
HIt This UP Please!
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