Vote Mc Aines
Aines= BAD STRUCTURE!!!!!! Shorten Them Lines Damn!....Neways..Nice Verse, You Had Dope Punches, And Your Consistency Was Ok, Bad Structure, With Ok Flow, Not TO Great Cuz OF The Structure Lol. Ok Vocab, Personals Were Ok Too..
Weezy= Better Structure But Still Bad
Lol, Ok punches, Wasnt Feelin Them To Much Cuz They Werent Directed At ME! Lol Jp, Work ON Ur Structure Too, And Flow Was Not Too Great..Take Away The / At The End OfYour Structure. No Vocab Really..
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Mc Aines
Punches= B
Flow= B-
Vocab= B
Structure= E Lmao
Overall Grade= C+/B-
Weezy
Punches= C+
Flow= B-
Vocab= D
Structure= C
Overall Grade= C
HIt THis UP
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