hmmmmmm......he did not spit yet so i am going to break down urs until he spits....

The battles already over (i won), but yet this battle has just began
Your punches aren't hitting......so save the "hits" for ur "man"....
^^....nicee....
hit_man???....shit man..."leave"....ur shytz all fuked up n' wackk
It's as if this waz actual football...and ur the one "running back"
^^nice wordplay.....first line..u culd work on that a lil'

Yo dis guy says max eight linez..read da rulez....da min. iz ten
now watch as he feeds off my verse...he copyin it..herez a pen!
^^werd at the first line....nice...
hitman???"...change that......cuz this "mans" just been "hit"
mah punches r piling on u..they makin holez in ur verse..bit by bit
^^once again....nice word play....ok 2nd line...

b4 u post ur obvious prewritten ur verse..make sure its better than mine..
Now hez signing a contract with the site...this wannab has jus resigned...
loll.....nice 2nd line.....
overall-- um.......id give u a 8/10 or 7.....nice 4 a newb....

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