How ya gonna Win, my verse'll be tha only thing Providing ya Game
Aside from ya Brain, 1 hit from me'll have ya body Lyin in Flame
^^ok....pretty good
So i advise ya Game Plan ta Stay set on Dodge'n tha Punches
Fuck tryin to hit back, jus focus on Survive'n fo Crunches
^^nice....
Im Violent wit Hunches, n my first Thought is ill Leave ya wit a Broke Back
Ya lose'n ya breath, thas Rap? i thought it was a violent Choke Act
^^ok.....u culd make that better
Ill be supprised if u Wrote Back, wut u lookin fo Death?
Leave'n u Shook, fuck u 'Rook's my flow got niggaz mo hooked then tha Meth
^^he already spit.....

break down:
opener: lyric
closer: tie.....both a lil weak
punches:.....ummmm.........i wuld say lyricallyabusive for the running back line....
wordplay: easily by lyrically abusive
structure: lyric......self-explanatiory
flow: ite......both good
vote: lyricallyabusive........nice for a newb......
ill pm u mah battle.......1

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