Thread: Broken fruit
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Old 02-10-04, 06:33 PM   #15
Freeman
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Short piece... Dope...

Good consistent flow... Structure was... Ya know... Normal...
Vocabulary was pretty decent for such a short verse...

You managed to say what you felt in a short space... Thats good...

Quotable...

slowly release rage through words on a tear soaken paper

That^, my friend... Was dope...

Keep dropping...

Pz...
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