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		Short piece... Dope... 
 
Good consistent flow... Structure was... Ya know... Normal... 
Vocabulary was pretty decent for such a short verse... 
 
You managed to say what you felt in a short space... Thats good... 
 
Quotable... 
 
slowly release rage through words on a tear soaken paper 
 
That^, my friend... Was dope... 
 
Keep dropping... 
 
Pz... 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
	
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