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i think its about time to murder this mothafucka kayohh
when u die no one with mourn u like they do Kato
^^alrite.....
this nigga probly gonna spit the minimum ten lines
he sent me a pm, askin me to lend rhymes
^^wak
i was like aight, but not my best stuff
he was like, thats fine but i messed up
^^wak-er
i said, i know dawg, dont be mad, ur from BC
so when i battle u, ill be sure to go easy
^^revise....but ok
maybe when ur nineteen ur get really lonely
but when im that age ill be drinken wit homies
who carez bout u?
hey dawg, because ur older than me doesnt mean u can compete
the only way this mothafucka could even compare is ta cheat
ok.....
and hes a lier to, says hes a mothafuckin engineer
between me and u, everyone knows whos the henchman here
^^finally a nice punch.....lol
u cant compare with my lyrics, its suicide to even try
gods on my side, and hates u, haha, only heathens die
^^gettin betterr
if he even goes the maximum twenty lines ill be suprised
his only goal in this battle, is ta try not ta die
^^weak
this bitch is maken a silk coat, look like a damn stone
i crushed through his jello, wait, that was a handbone!?!?
niceee clozer
total- 5/6-10

Despite, you pre-write, what you type, Im hop?in you can resite, somethin tight, I like,
I?d ask you to suck on this here hairy cock, but you seem like, the type, ta bite,
wtf.....
Posin as a D12 member, tisk tisk, didn?t wanna battle a celebrity, but you insist
I carefully calculate this, creating a collaboration like a chemist,
ok...
Your only punches are KayOhh, is a gay hoe, whatever you say bro,
Your lines are too immature, they even be soundin like they written with cray-o
wak
la, Fuck the front lines, I belong on center stage, cuz my inner rage,
holds greater weight, turnin this thick paper to a thinner page;
nice...good shyt with that
You should go back to resite refine, your ragitty rhyme so its like mine,
So when it comes fight time, youre able to rock a tight chime;
oki dokie......
Cuz right now, its like a loose hoe, its sad how you refuse to go,
Despite all my intimidation, I enjoy your determination,
nice.....
Its cute how little you, is fuckin wit big me,
Lines so powerful, they jus snapped you like a twig gee,
nice.......
I don?t care what y?all say, this dudes rap belongs in a ballet,
I?m done with this wannabe gangsta, where?s my vallet...
ok.....
total=7/10...
u started out weak....but ended stronger
punches: ko....in the end his hit harder.....n had a few in da begginin
flow: tie.....both work on it
structure:both gotta work on it......
creativity: ko.....took time on hiz punches
vote: ko.....weak battle....but he took this