unique style i'd say. you had your strong points in there. i had sum difficulty
in finding the rhymes. the flow was effect negatively by that. but it was still
a great read. it brought in my attention. i actually read the whole thing which is
sumthing. lol. dope piece. propz. the topic was commendable. keep at it.

hit this up plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113109

pz

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