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Old 02-10-04, 07:33 PM   #19
MythikuL
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fucka testament cuz i break gods rules with hellish verses/
he's from dopeness but but his crew derives straight from the circus/(wow)*
^^not a bad opener...

Stomach Bubbly So Takes Off Pants

im heating up you not on my level not even able to cause Arson/(his sig)
claims he is Da Elite but ur career's over before it even started/(chea!)
^^nice personal on the crew..but nothin great

your like a blown out speaker, the listeners cant stand your words/
not only are u the shit, but you look like the whole fuckin turd/(oh my!)
^not feelin it...^^..um..YA

not dope is your location but my station is set on killin emcees/
u got no balls to battle me like u got mad raisin disease/
^^punch was there..but..not great^^

Super Death Bar Taking A Dump On Your Face

cant get the best of this, im relentless ill without medicine/
No 'w' in your name so make this ya last 'will' and 'testament'/(hotness death killer)!
^^nice finisher...if u would write everything lil more like this..ud get more votes!




Accepting My Callout? Stupid, Saw My Verse And Quacked...
Im Throwin Hard Punches,U Getin Demolished By The Impact!
~nice flow..ok punch~
Wanting Me To Spit 1st? Shit Son, You Really Want A Beating??
Im Delievering Hard Hits Personally, Like Two Boxers Competing...
^^FILLER^^not a great punch
Expecting To Get Votes With That Garbage? Lawyer Get Serious...
Kid Named Lawyer, But Yet, He Still Aint Able To Be Imperious...
^^pretty ok personal...attempted

Like Muhammad Ali, Im Knocking You, Uh-Oh, Now Hes Delirious...
Wishing You Werent Alive, Cuz My Verse And I Are Deleterious...
nice vocab...ok punch
Im Pushing This Kid, Thinking You Dope Cuz Your Record Is 1-0?
Nope, Cuz He's 1-1 Soon, I Merked This Kid, Like.............Whoa!..
Agh...not a strong finisher..not impressed



FLOW...ILL
punches..ILL
VOCAB...ILL
wordplay..tie
structure..tie
multies...n2many..but agh...Lawyer
originality...tie
overall...ILL TEST


^^ILL..just had the better...more well written piece....Lawyer had an average..spit good but nothin up 2 ILLs verse

GOOD BATTLE U 2..

KEEP UPZ

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