short but commendable. the flow was apparent. the meaning was felt and the
topic was nice. i felt this one and it seemed as if i could somehow relate to
wut ur saying. some lines were a bit perplexing but it was an enjoyable read.
keep at it.

hit this up plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113109

pz

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