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Flyweight
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IP:
If that's your style go with but in text the rhymes don't come thru very well. I'd have to hear the way you say it before I could say more but flow seems off based on just what I can see. I liked the conversational tone of it. All the thoughts were connected. Anyway if you have an explanation for the structure or a link to some audio drop it. Hit my "Broken Metamorphosis" if you get a chance.
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