Poppa gets this... both were kinda weak.. but his was actually aimed at his opponent.
Lyrikal.. structure was poor... punches worse. Vocab was okay, but as said, most of your verse was self gratification.. Also don't capital every damn letter...
Poppa.. structure was much better compared. Punches were kinda played.. 'talent pool' etc.. but they hit at least. Some creativity/originality in there.. as well as some decent similies/metas..
Overall a much better battle verse.. took most catergorys..

Vote - Poppa Bean

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