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Old 02-10-04, 07:51 PM   #9
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Lyrical - ya verse was basic.. no hard punches or complex ones... didnt hit hard and alot of ya shit was just tryin to make u look good... try to get some personals in there and metas, wordplay was lacking too, inclue that in ya verse also.. ya struct was horrible too, it was n00bish and you should spit it like Poppa Bean did...

Poppa - first of all... ya struct was perfect with the way u formated it and ya lines were a good lenght.. none really varied that much and none were stretched.. ya flow was good, like i said none of ya lines were stretched and none were really varied... you had some decent punches, and some ok personals, ya wordplay was ok and u did have some there... so overall u had a decent verse.. much better then Lyrical and it was enough to take this battle

V/ Poppa bean
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