dope piece. long but worth the read. i enjoyed it. the words made sense which
can be hard to find in poems with as much multies as yours. the rhyming was
consistent. the structure is near flawless. and the complexity was great also. very
tight. the words were small. lol. lovely. i found this too be sumwut educational
for some odd reason. keep it up. stay tight.
fave line:
Everlasting knowledge, gives me the mental polish, to completely abolish,
.....all ignorance I observe.
So I keep on inciting, and continually inviting, to notice what I’m writing,
.....a remembrance of verve.
^nice
hit this up plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113109
pz
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