aight this was pretty simple even though both verses were half-assed...

Flow-IT
Multis-IT
Vocab-lust
Punches-IT
Wordplay-IT
Structure-tie (both choppy)
Personals-IT

aight so both can improved their structure...Lust you just need more better personals as well as multis...put them in whenever you can you know...definately learn how to use wordplay....you used like 2 "big" words...haha n they werent the greatest vocab...werent the greatest spelled either...plus hit hikm with punches period...i saw no punches that could touch anyone anytime...both elevate...aight...half-assed battle... vote- IT

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