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Old 02-10-04, 08:18 PM   #20
Envy Styles
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Word Definate= Vote

Word Definate= You Came Pretty Hard, With Solid Punches, And Ok Flow, Work On Your Flow Feel me?, Structure Was Ok Too, You Needa Fix It, Make Em' Shorter And Match Up, Vocab Slacked, Upp On That A lil Bit Too, NIce Wordplay Prolly Best iN YOur Verse

Hit Man= YOu Came Hard Too, You Had Solid Punches, With Nice Flow. Your Structure Was Ok, And Your Vocab Wasnt Good.Wordplay Wasnt Good,That Hurt You ALot, You needa Up On That TOoo Feel Me? You Can Elevate, BTW YOU Broke Two Rules, The Deadline And Sway, Dont Do That

Hit Man
Punches= B
Flow= B
Structure= B
Vocab= C
Wordplay= C-
Overall Grade= C+/B-

Word Definate
Punches- B
Flow- B
Structure- B
Vocab- C
Wordplay= A-
Overall Grade= B/B+

HIt Mine UP
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