I just read all three dawg, and man nothing I say could add to the already vast aray of compliments you've received. I loved the concept, loved the structure, loved the flow, it was truly unique. This is the kind of shit that gets slept on by the public but is loved by the critics.....you gotta gift man. loved the "juxtapostioning" by "ending" the song at the "beggining" . You're description was crazy, I'm a big fan of multi's and they we're hot too......outstanding job.
please peep my verses they aint as complex, and conceptually they're not as profound but I wrote it more mainstream.....I'd love your opinion.