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Old 02-10-04, 08:35 PM   #21
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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Word Definate takes this battle easy....Word Definate had a ok overall verse...Nothing great....but his closer was the best punch thrown by either emcee....WD...watch out fo played lines....like basically anything about Tupac.....also fix your structure so every 2 lines end with rhyming words...not verse that rhyme in the middle of lines...but an ok battle from you...seen you come better...but ehh...everyone has off days
Hit_Man....You came with way too much filler and played lines...some "punches" you threw weren't even directed at your opponent...jus generals.....cut down on your use of multis as they didn't help your verse at all...Multis are only good if they are also punches/multis/metas...
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please drop an honest vote here guys..thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112459
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