The battles already over (i won), but yet this battle hasjust began
Your punches aren't hitting......so save the "hits" for ur "man"....
^^Not to bad but I think you could come on with a stronger opening.^^^
hit_man???....shit man..."leave"....ur shytz all fuked up n' wackk
It's as if this waz actual football...and ur the one "running back
^^Perrrrrfect! Nice metaphor you did a good job.^^^
Yo dis guy says max eight linez..read da rulez....da min. iz ten
now watch as he feeds off my verse...he copyin it..herez a pen!
^^^ Nice Punch it was well delivered and you it flowed in nicely^^^
"hitman???"...change that......cuz this "mans" just been "hit"
mah punches r piling on u..they makin holez in ur verse..bit by bit
^^^Again nicely done by flowing off the pen giving haha^^^
b4 u post ur obvious prewritten verse..make sure its better than mine..
Now hez signing a contract with the site...this wannab has jus resigned....
^^^Good ending seeing as when someone resigns it ends they're job and you ended your verse^^^ GOOD JOB.


How ya gonna Win, my verse'll be tha only thing Providing ya Game
Aside from ya Brain, 1 hit from me'll have ya body Lyin in Flame
^^^N2bad but again the openings arn't always the easiest to do^^^
So i advise ya Game Plan ta Stay set on Dodge'n tha Punches
Fuck tryin to hit back, jus focus on Survive'n fo Crunches
^^^Good Punch haha (get it?) didn't think so. . ^^^
Im Violent wit Hunches, n my first Thought is ill Leave ya wit a Broke Back
Ya lose'n ya breath, thas Rap? i thought it was a violent Choke Act
^^^Hmm that line seems suspicious but it was good^^^
Ill be supprised if u Wrote Back, wut u lookin fo Death?
Leave'n u Shook, fuck u 'Rook's my flow got niggaz mo hooked then tha Meth
^^^hmm I do not quite get that ending maybe it's just me. . . ^^^ Good job

Overall vote goes to lyricallyabusive