Originally Posted by Kry-O-Gene-X

ehh..I feel down..although some people said my verse was nice, I still didnt get the win..I spit a lil time writing that verse..I tried to put a lil feeling into it..When I seen the topic I instantly thought if an artist, then I was thinking of the creation of life, and how it was from God's point of view..so thats what I did..and overall, I seen a few flaws in it but it was a good verse..

So I was wondering..what could I have done to make my verse better?..Some more multis?..or..what?..And I also feel that my opponent didnt even write on the topic. Im not trying to hate because he had a good verse, but it wasnt on the topic..so..ehh..someone just help me because I do want to be good competition in S.S.