kuniva
i think its about time to murder this mothafucka kayohh
when u die no one with mourn u like they do Kato
-played,punch,metiphore = 3
this nigga probly gonna spit the minimum ten lines
he sent me a pm, askin me to lend rhymes
personal = 5
i was like aight, but not my best stuff
he was like, thats fine but i messed up
filler = 1
i said, i know dawg, dont be mad, ur from BC
so when i battle u, ill be sure to go easy
personal = 2
maybe when ur nineteen ur get really lonely
but when im that age ill be drinken wit homies
filler = 1
hey dawg, because ur older than me doesnt mean u can compete
the only way this mothafucka could even compare is ta cheat
-stretch,personal = 1
and hes a lier to, says hes a mothafuckin engineer
between me and u, everyone knows whos the henchman here
personal,metiphore = 3
u cant compare with my lyrics, its suicide to even try
gods on my side, and hates u, haha, only heathens die
punch,self hype = 3
if he even goes the maximum twenty lines ill be suprised
his only goal in this battle, is ta try not ta die
filler = 1
this bitch is maken a silk coat, look like a damn stone
i crushed through his jello, wait, that was a handbone!?!?
metiphore,punch = 5

I've only seen one worste so far on this site and that was retard101, don't worry tho his was alot worste. But yours was very bad, way too much filler you need to focus more on your punches than tryna tell a story. Basicly say one subject in each bar, dont carry one subject through 2 bars. Work on that.
Overall = 25
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KayOhh
Despite, you pre-write, what you type, Im hop’in you can resite, somethin tight, I like,
I’d ask you to suck on this here hairy cock, but you seem like, the type, ta bite,
-streched,personal,-multi,wordplay = 5
Posin as a D12 member, tisk tisk, didn’t wanna battle a celebrity, but you insist
I carefully calculate this, creating a collaboration like a chemist,
-stretched,multi,metiphore,vocab = 5
Your only punches are KayOhh, is a gay hoe, whatever you say bro,
Your lines are too immature, they even be soundin like they written with cray-o
-filler,metiphore = 4
la, Fuck the front lines, I belong on center stage, cuz my inner rage,
holds greater weight, turnin this thick paper to a thinner page;
-multi,-self hype = 0
You should go back to resite refine, your ragitty rhyme so its like mine,
So when it comes fight time, youre able to rock a tight chime;
-multi,metiphore = 3
Cuz right now, its like a loose hoe, its sad how you refuse to go,
Despite all my intimidation, I enjoy your determination,
metiphore,-filler = 3
Its cute how little you, is fuckin wit big me,
Lines so powerful, they jus snapped you like a twig gee,
-self hype,metiphore = 3
I don’t care what y’all say, this dudes rap belongs in a ballet,
I’m done with this wannabe gangsta, where’s my vallet...
punch,metiphore = 5

My opinion way to many multi's. You focused way too much on the multi's creating alot of filler's and not enough punches. Quite honestly your a close third behind Kuniva and retard101 as the worste I have veiwed so far. Work on balancing you verse more, making it shorter by line and less multi more punch. Work on that.
Overall = 28
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Vote = KayOhh

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