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Old 02-11-04, 01:23 AM   #16
Intoxicated
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Wise ways and pheonix took this....

Wise verse was aight, couple good punches and personals...

"Ill Test ya retarded..man even ya own concience questions you..
...Shows how important you are..
^ That was tha 1st time I mentioned you!"


Ill Test, ya structure was horrible to read... u didnt need to break everything up like that with the awkward pauses n everything... other than that ya verse was alright... you had some decent stuff in there...not as good as Wiseways tho.

"Kaos Theory Thought He Was Walking Through .:K:.
..Until He Met His Last Bar..**
Now He Feels Stupid...So He Got A New Name.."

Physiks, wasnt really feelin ya shit man... it was bad but nothing stood out... there were 2 lines of equal quality to me so im gonna quote them both, ya last 2 barz...

"Wise ways, merked a couple newbies for his rec, now hes vet..
Think cus you rep biters and open mic, now your dope in text..
No turning back, like watching instant replay with no rewind..
You both dont think straight, like blondes with crooked minds.."


Pheonix, dopest drop in the battle... you had a couple hard hitting punches/personals... these 2 lines alone probably could have won this battle...

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Well Ill, you're an herb...but at least you got morals, dude...
Cuz honesty's the best policy...and thats the damn fucking truth. "

and

"And Ill...thats fucking comedic...i can't even seem to believe this....
Faggot named his crew "Da Elite" cuz he couldnt make the elite list."


Good battle but my votes gotta go to Pheonix and Wiseways\


If all of you cou8ld vote on 1 of my battles they could finally get closed and i would really appreciate that!!
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