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Old 02-11-04, 04:23 AM   #6
Lethargic
Middle Weight
 
Posts: 828
From: Campbellsville
IP:

You newbie fucks. Outcome....your verse was garbage...nothing more, possibly less. Virtually everything about it was shit. What little punches you did have were weak as fuck. Jihad...used wordplay...had some nice concepts...much harder punches then outcome. There were a couple lines that were too extended...and a couple played. It wasn't a bad verse...with some polish and some work, you could be dope. Just keep the creativity up. Try and get in elevated front lines...get away from these newbie sluts.

Vote ~ Jihad