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Old 02-11-04, 08:31 AM   #7
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Cali - alot of played concepts.. the name flips werent v.effective.. 'cereal killer' an 'dick' line let u down.. flow was off cos it was a struggle to read..

Die - opener was ok.. nice concept.. but ya 4th line stank.. dont jus use words like "wha" cos it rhymes.. think it thru more.. vocab was limited an the wordin needs to be more concise to make the punches effective.. but u did enuff to win this one..

VoTe = TiLLEyEDiE

drop a vote here a.s.a.p:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112120

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