"The Eleete"
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IP:
This was a good piece............the topic pulled me into it an was what kept my interest in your piece.........its a touchy subject an bein in the military i understand a lot of what you were talking about an what you were tryin to.........so loved the material......great approach on it........vocab was pretty smooth, vocab was pretty good too.........all in all good piece!! keep it up!!!
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