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IP:
This was iight...
Flow was iight... Vocabulary needs improving... Get rid of the ~~ things at the end of lines...
You will improve im sure  ...
To get people to comment in this forum... Drop ffedback on their OM's... Then ask them to hit yours up... Like im about to do now...
Hit up my, 'Chapter Two' piece...
Thanks...
Pz...
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