keeping the story going along nicely..
i could picture most of the scenes happening in my head
pretty dope
you got across the demented nature of the guy..
but pehaps ou could have improved on it..
easy story to read..
youre leaving the endings well though...makes you want to figure out what happens next
imagery was the standout..
perhaps some lines coulda done with rearranging too to make the plot easier to follow chronologically
props