Thread: The Transition
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Old 02-11-04, 10:31 AM   #5
SMZ
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Flow was alright - could probably use a little work to even it out some. Vocab' level was good - looked like you put some thought behind the piece. Liked the way you used logical argument progression within. Hit my "Broken Metamorphosis" if you can.
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