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Old 02-11-04, 10:47 AM   #5
SMZ
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Flow was off at the top but got pretty strong toward the bottom half. Lots of good similes. Vocab was adequate. Pretty nice piece overall. 6.75 Hit my "Broken Metamorphosis" if you can.
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