lilrenegade89
ima pop tihs lyrical hit it ain't gunna freeze/
this shit so eazy it's like shootin the breeze/.
metiphore,personal = 2
im from p.s.a. were we smoke the treez/
u can't fuck with ne of our mc's/
-self hype = 0
freezer get burnt ne day by me/
ima murk ur ass u ain't no mc/
-repeat ryhme,-self hype,punch = 1
ill blow ur ass up n set u free/
-structure,punch = 0

Very bad. Sorry but this is what you need to do. You need to add more detail into each line along with a lil complexity, and mix sum punches with your metiphores. Kill the easy ryhme scheme's and don't repeat words at the end of you lines, it's to basic. Work on That. Alot. And don't complain, I don't value second drops.
Overall = 3
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freeza pop
Renegatorade searchin' for the soul...
sorry brotha you gonna lose this poll...
-confusion,punch = 0
you try yo ass to run fast...
but we all know you gonna fall on your asssk someone else....
-stretch,-flo,-wordplay = 0
Clifford da big red dawg runnin' through the grass...
Gnaw on yo bone...
Don't condone...
-vocab,-metiphore = 0
Try and rewind and begin again...
Go back to your pig pen...
Go to bed and sleep it off, bitch!
-flo,metiphore,punch = 1

The absolute worste I have viewed so far. I sure hope I start viewing good battles again. Anyways, You honestly need to just quit. And I'm being nice or atleast trying to be, but let's face it. You have no skill what so ever. I can't even put what you need to improve. Just forget about this site. Work on that.
Overall = 1
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Vote = lilrengade89
this battle was like a basketball game wit hockey scoring

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