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Old 02-11-04, 11:19 AM   #24
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Young Savage takes this one...

Blak Woods was just too simple...

No wordplay to speak of...

And ya didn't type much, too short considering the length of his.

Now, if ya'd used wordplay effectively...

Ya wouldn't have needed to bring more.

Cuz Savage is gonna learn...

When ya try and overdose the reader on wordplay...
(like he did)

Someone with subtle and slight wordplay...

Will come in and clown that herbish display he threw.

For instance...

I see multi's and flow, lots of punctuation...but no dissin...
His rhyme must be dying, since it's on a life support system.


See?

But this time, Savage wins...

Peace

Holla back with ya vote!!!
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