Se7en
I’ll pop this, till under rated drops, like a single that’s hot
This guys as fake as when Bill Clinton claimed he never smoked pot
-multi,metiphore,metiphore = 3
On top??? your not even close, you never traveled the road
IJL??????? so his crew gets boners when he says................I jizz Loads
personal,metiphore,wordplay = 6
Personal’s affect him like a test, a bitch like him wit a small chest
Would make his skills and rhymes temporary like Janet exposing her breast
multi,-metiphore,metiphore,-played = 4
I’m in it, your out, get a clue to your brain and then you can send it
Wat takes you hours and hours, only takes my ass fifteen minutes
-confusion,-flo,-fake personal = 0
100 percent of this verse, would make this guy turn into a super herb
He’s so dumb, they told him to drive straight, but he drove against a curve
-self punch,-metiphore = 0
Crew battles are easy and simple, your career wit them are popped like pimples
Native Americans got scared when they saw you rhyme and use symbols
-flo,-repeated punch,-confusion = 0
Limbo, to ripple down your back, he’s a pick-up in a real life game of jacks
This guy wears a dildo belt, so he rides through the hood and claims he’s strapped
multi,-confusion,wordplay = 4
A gat is a weapon, along wit this guy’s mom and the played rhymes he’s stressin’
At home on a couch, jerking off to gay models, is the only location this guy’s reppin’
-punch,punch,-played = 2
Testin’ and messin’ my tatics, I use on people like him that are faggots
I shot this guy in his ego, so this verse was juss a little target practice
-vocab,multi,-confusion,wordplay = 3
Not too good.I was expecting better. More or less alot of nothing in this verse. Basicly alot of words, that was it. You need to re-word things up a bit. Alot of confusion. Work on that.
Overall = 22
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TheUnderRated
kids militant a Major herb now watch me light this spliff....
Then like lemmings lead your whack crew.....directly off the cliff...
vocab?,multi,metiphore = 6
I could kick played lines "you couldn't spit ill if you were sick"..
and still win cause se7en spits more whack rhymes..... then all of soundclick....
filler,metiphore = 5
Check it I'll try to sum up your crew by adding these simple words...
~Yo What uP~checked the Limited Edition of Killer MC....said y'all was herbs...
personal,punch = 7
bout to Code-187, Se7en, Tilleyedie, plz be my guest of Honor....
Cause of the Kanserous sonage by my Fatal Lyrikzz....nicknamed RB.com's father...
-continued personal = 6
Look I already arrested your crew put em behing bars...^^^^
But don't worry i'm topical so i'll help heal their battle scars....
wordplay,-confusion = 4
Heres your chance.......forfeit........nah he stupid for that.....
Punches swing to him he getting more hits than Burt Backerat....
metiphore = 6
I could draw straight lines for two bars-------------but thats no fun...
Tonight I'm reaching a new level of speed i call it merk 1 (ahahha)....
metiphore, -corny = 4
Hey se7en walk a mile in the shoes of a true rap head.....
go ahead i got a new brand name for you i called em Mer-Keds.....(ahhah)
-corny = 3
Hope you seriously didn't think your 2 closing bar's were funny. However, Anyways, Besides the weak finish this was an OK verse, not bad at all. You should just work on finishing with a little more punch and wit besides Ked's shoes and Mach 1. OK tho.
Overall = 41
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