thats gay as hell
i wrote a long chunk of words discussing the verses and the jessica lynch shit..
and thought id posted it
but its not here = !
sorry
well basically this was dope..
pen..
nice verse got that side of the story across well and some tight imagery usage
nothing to really complain about except the latter lines seemed to get a bt elongated
but eh..still good
really good collab
g.hods piece was outstanding..
littered with subtle jibes at politics and sarcastically done with a range of vocab
ended it perfectly as well kind of returning it back to the first verse
you clearly know your subject matter well..
and displayed a great talent for writing on this issue
dope
props