decent collab here
liked the first verse better than the other
seemed to have a bit of rawness and originality to it

'Its like a test for me now pushing my skills to the limits…
It takes along time to be the best….
…….you don’t deserve it….if you get it in minutes…
^ill
liked the whole thing flow etc blah blah
liked both the rhyme schemes too
seemd to work well
credz your verse was cool as well
but seemed to lack a bit of substance..
writers voice so to speak needs to improve to get a beter message across to the reader