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Old 02-11-04, 01:52 PM   #12
Dev
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interesting choice of topic, but not really my thing.... you handled it well, both of you, pen, yours started off rreally nice, and stayed pretty constant, but the last third, seemed to a different flow, cos it was stretched a bit, koal, your verse had a nice flow going too, and some nice wording..... it followed nicely from pens,.... but like i said, didnt really captivate me..... good collab tho
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