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Old 02-11-04, 02:21 PM   #1
Jo-JO
Flyweight
 
Posts: 127
From: YC 17404
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Outcome i told you before and I say it again
Your place is in Open mic where you can write what u sayin
Now you didn't get a chance to take a second glance
At the shit you said before you picked up your lyrical lance
Now your untrained and confused leaving me plenty amused
Your structure is wack and skill is lack tell me wich ryming dic. you used
Your blind to any type of forthright topic
And your tears droping fast like a forest in the tropic
I know I know it's metaphors and bull shit
But homie piece of advice you have to learn how to use it
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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17
16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish