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Old 02-11-04, 02:30 PM   #13
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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From: GhEtTo
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ok now ima bout to battle a kid name oakley,
turn ur ass around kid lyk u doin the hokey pokey,
cuz i already won this battle shawty okie dokie,
thats an awful rhyme
bitch im already tired of battlin im a drive to maryland,
u herd i dont hit women so u got a sex change, now ya name carolen,
ya gon break ya knuckles trin to hit me dat hard quess wut...im still standin,
lol....whack...no real punches
bitch only wanted to battle i looked like a herb wit 3 posts
trust me my punches n punchlines will break ya nose,
this cat lookin for newbs so he can brag n boast,
nothing here either
get over it u lost i exposed u lyk janet jackson's tit,
shut up bitch look who the herb now i jus finished it
mad mad mad played line


Oakley's beat?....
You gotta better chance at owning 2 left feet..
For christ's sake! I mean your from St. Pete!/1
Take out the numbers...we know where your lines end..also try and refrain from usiong your own name in ya rhyme...
Just drop you head, point an click the X button
You with a win is like Ray Charles puttin.../2
whhhok...kinda weak tho
Your a gluten for punishment, an I'm dropin moderate..
Az's verse called me up, an asked if i can Father it/3
ok
I like your sig also, It's nice how u reflect on your wins
1 of 50 kin? and Now your rapping? kid you forget your Asian!/4
hey...I'm Asian...so?
15 years old? You can't even borrow your Mom's caravan...
Wait..you want a vote?...
You better have more roll-over more than a cingular plan/5
played..ok
I aint even breakin a gland,dubz..u remind me of that kid Deluxe
Difference being?...he's makin money while u sit here and suck/6
ok

Oakley takes this easy...he's the only one that attempted to throw a decent punch...AzN came with some whack ass ryhmes that had no force...Oakley ahd an ok verse...some lpayed shit too...but also some good punchess

PLease drop an honest vote here...It's honestly a dope battle...wait ya both newbs...well...drop an opinion please..It would be appreciated http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113550