I got to go with outcome on this one...
Breakdown...
Punches-Outcome..nice witty shit...lot's of hard hitting lines
wordplay-Outcome..got a lil too complex at times but still better
Meta's -Outcome I like the complexity here.
Structure-Tie..you both were solid
Sust. outcome..Line for Line Brain Bashing
Overall outcome
i like Outcome's verse better...If you are going to have lines with a low syllable count they better be witty because it is much easier too set up a good line with a longer line. I liked the wordplay involved...he got pretty sick with it...good shit.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113614
Seven just cause I voted against you don't mean you shouldn't vote as well. Just be honest.