Ambitiouse
I never plagurise but in this case you can say I bite rhymes....
I'll chew this Lyric up and spit the garbage out in Front Lines
-self punch,metiphore = 4
I'll take your keys for myself, like crookid cops off the shelf...
U welcome no help, but I had to save u from humiliatin yourself!
multi,-confusion = 3
Too late to skate, thought he spit fire when he baked a cake..
He's aprin fake, Martha Stewart for halloween what a mistake to make!
multi,-corny = 3
No heat in ur kitchen, u'd better look into that make it your mission...
Cuz w/ no ambition to fix it, ur outta luck cant even call the technician!
mulit,self personal = 4
I bleed words, stab this herb Lyric in the head and then let the ink run....
Put a heart in his chest to write with cuz his brain is unable to think from!
punch,punch,wordplay,metiphore = 7

Not good aside from the closer which I liked. My opinion you need to kill the 2 multi's in every single line and focus more on punches. The only personal you had that I had seen was the one about you own alias. Work on that.
Overall = 21
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Lyric
Ambitious to battle me..jus another newb imposter
You roll with Executives? You aint even on theroster
personal,punch = 7
No love between us..Shoulda made this a pink slip
Cause you know what they say...
...Absence makes the heart grow fonder bitch
-flo,punch,-filler = 4
New Jersey rep...Nothing there except polution at its worst
If I told you to put your best foot forward..
...Youd fall down head first!
personal,-wrong,wordplay,punch = 6
Lookin at ya avy your gettin merked..turn that grim reaper south
I was gonna call ya rhyme whack...
...But ya rhymes took da words outta my mouth
personal,wordplay,punch = 7
Got so disrespected as Tech...had to change your name this time
I'll kill 2 birds with one stone ...Uhh... I mean 2 MCs wit 1 rhyme
personal,metiphore,personal,wordplay,punch = 8

Good drop, slightly better than OK. I enjoyed most of it, However it did seem as if quite a few times u filled the end of first line wit BS just to make it ryhme wit your second bar. You did this in your last bar, but the last line was very nice, had a little bit of everything in it. Good Job.
Overall = 32
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Vote = Lyric

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