^^^ (Funny how peeps interpret shit) (southsideloco/imagery)

Real nice story, man...

Good realism, great vocab...

Couldn't find a fault in ya flow.

I wished ya'd have told more about the girls...

Described em some, but that's just my preference.

Helps me with imagery.

But nonetheless, this was way long...

Longer than I normally ever dedicate myself to reading.

But the flow and story made the read fly.

A real sign that you've just read something dope.

Only thing I'd ask ya improve on?

Well, the imagery.
Plenty of emotion here, not enough of imagery.
That'd be about it.

Peace

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