IP:
i can see you live up to ur imagery name becuz with each line, the images
were given such detail that it brought the story to life. excellent on that behalf.
the flow was great and so was the consistency in this. the rhymes were ill
and present. the topic was amusing and it was neat how they all lead to something
new. at least to me. the complexity was another positive in thie. dope piece you
got here. almost as dope as my sig. lol. keep writin'
pz
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