Well...

I owed you cuz you read mine...

This had a very nice flow...
(despite the fucked paragraph structure, ever heard of lines and bars?)

Some nice blends as well...
(flowing into different concepts)

But aside from that, it was very basic.

No wordplay, just straight ahead self prop.

Very eh, on the topic and execution.

Dedicate your efforts towards a real theme or mindframe.

Forget about ya self.

Speak on other shit, then we can really rate ya work, man.

Cuz this don't cut it as far as content.

Peace

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