View Single Post
Old 02-11-04, 06:58 PM   #11
KayOhh
Flyweight
 
KayOhh's Avatar
 
Posts: 169
From: BC
IP:

I'd go through your shit bone collector, but in the thirty fuckin lines you repeated the same dis a couple times, and you didnt even have any good hits.

u wanna go personal and diss my profile,
idont usualy do this it aint my style./
Kinda hurt, you used the same rhyme as his
imean you diss me,your crews cripz,
what a wack name im gona give you some tips,
your verse was patchy you had lots of trips./
A missin punch
aii1ght this bitch is called BoNe'zCoLlEcTeRr,
unlucky for him im the rap inspector,
you said your good thats off the scale on my Lie Detector./*1
aight
i rate your verse as 2/10, its as good as that,
you drop like that again ill make your brains go splat,
the wound will be so Big you cant cover it with no hat,
are'nt you glad i showed up and spat,
im gona nibble at you like you were cheese and iwas a rat./
The beginnin was good, but the last line was kinda cheesey ( didnt mean to make a joke )
You try to diss me again ill pull my trigger,
wtf it only took 1bullet to kill this wigga./
...im white
Im bored with you bitch so ima put u to rest,
you said in your verse ifailed a test,
if this was your test ipassed it with ease,confirmation im the best./
shoulda said confirming, but thats aight
who do you think you are dissin before i spit,
ill garante all my punches hit,
this wack ass piece of shit./
this would be an aight bar in the middle, but not at the end

Both weren't too impressive, but i give it to rascal, I'll vote when i get to 100, soon enough.

Hit up my battles, I only need two more each: