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Old 02-11-04, 07:19 PM   #13
rule
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Pretty good battle...

Daz..you had a good structure and some nice punches but some lacked creativity although they still were good some okie wordplay try and use more personals they really help in battles..but the ones you had were good.

Cam...good solid verse...a little harder hitting punches then daz same type of flow/structure but the personals were okie and some more complexity..

can you both drop a vote on one of my battles pleae honestly..thanks

Vote. Cam